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Approved#1PostSubject: Immortal HQ   Wed Mar 08, 2017 7:43 pm

Name: Immortal HQ, imm'enne 
Habitable: not without authorization (yes)
Terrain: mountainous.
Size: Large
Population: evenly distributed over all jeslorian races.
Location: orbitting between jeslore and apex 122

Development Thread: http://www.convergencerp.net/t865-imm-enne-dev-thread#5484


Technology
Bylian Dwarven tech


History
upon leaving jeslore, the immortals needed to set up a base on a planet other than apex 122, there were no nearby planet; fortunatly the immortals had the bylian dwarves at their disposal. the dwarves 'build' a planet. and soon the most impenetrable place that the dracholmian empire ever funded existed, the immortals happily took base on imm'enne

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the planet is a fortress, as defensive and yet elusive as the dwarves could manage, it was truly the bylian master piece due to it's size, defensive abilities and even offensive abilities. the defensive abilities feature a structure covering the planets, making for a though terrain to fly fighter and bomber jets through and several levels of mazelike turret hallways. and a massive defense force ready to defend against attackers. the offensive abilities consist of radio controlled missiles shot out from the planet to hit intruders.


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Approved#2PostSubject: Re: Immortal HQ   Thu Mar 09, 2017 5:57 pm

This needs accurately described technology. In fine detail, its defensive and offensive abilities.


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Approved#3PostSubject: Re: Immortal HQ   Thu Mar 09, 2017 6:47 pm

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Approved#4PostSubject: Re: Immortal HQ   Thu Mar 09, 2017 7:55 pm

High Tech- is too vague. Please place this as "immortal Technology". I highlighted the issue in Red.


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Approved#5PostSubject: Re: Immortal HQ   Thu Mar 09, 2017 8:16 pm

changed to honour the dwarven tinkering, i will upload a major lore piece soon.
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Approved#6PostSubject: Re: Immortal HQ   Thu Mar 09, 2017 8:53 pm

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